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 Oh Lord, kindly come into my dwelling;
 Your throne is made ready...
-There are vases of flowers and candelabras,
+By it is a vase of flowers and a candelabra.
-Coated with mental sweetness in myriad streams.
+Coated with mind's sweetness in myriad streams
-My heart's yearning is to greet You constantly.
+Is the yearning of my heart ever to greet Thee.
-No dark will ever touch
+The throne is never overshadowed by darkest night;
-this, your personal abode,
+The flower vase is never lidded by any shame.
-no shyness can destroy
+Unaided, the candle flame continues alight,
-its splendid floral bowers,
+Only for Your sake, Lord, only for Your sake.
-and the flame of the lamp
-burns silently
-for you alone.
 My mind's sweet love
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 in beautiful dreams
 like timid forest deer.
 My inner heart soars
 to limitless domains