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-I will not heed anything else.
+I won't heed any other words—
-I do not want to heed, I do not want to heed.
+I don't want to heed them, no I do not.
-Bearing the pains of all minds in my life,
+I go from darkness toward light,
-I proceed from darkness to light,
+Racing from chasm to starsong,
-From the deepest dungeon to the songs of the stars.
+Bearing with me the pains of all minds.
-I do not hear anything else.
+I won't hear any other words—
-I do not want to hear, I do not want to hear.
+I don't want to hear them, no I do not.
-I move towards You with the rhythm of dance.
+I move toward You in the rhythm of dance,
-Singing songs to You, filled with the sweetness of my life.
+Singing to You of life filled with sweetness,
-Carrying the thoughts of all minds in my mind,
+Bearing with me the tales of all minds.
-I do not know anything else.
+I won't know any other words—
-I do not want to know, I do not want to know.
+I don't want to know them, no I do not.
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