Talk:Mora mukta bhumir meye: Difference between revisions

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== Original translation and reason for change ==
After receiving some complaints about possible unwanted implications of the first line in the translation, the translation was revised. The original translation posted here contained the descriptor "free-range", which was intended to express a degree of liberation and unleashed potential that might be lost with the current wording. Before revision, the translation posted on Sarkarverse read:
<poem>
We are free-range girls.
In mountains and hills, beside rapids,
Beside rills, in song and dance we whirl.
</poem>
--[[User:Abhidevananda|Abhidevananda]] ([[User talk:Abhidevananda|talk]]) 07:28, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Revision as of 07:28, 10 March 2016

Original translation and reason for change

After receiving some complaints about possible unwanted implications of the first line in the translation, the translation was revised. The original translation posted here contained the descriptor "free-range", which was intended to express a degree of liberation and unleashed potential that might be lost with the current wording. Before revision, the translation posted on Sarkarverse read:

We are free-range girls.
In mountains and hills, beside rapids,
Beside rills, in song and dance we whirl.

--Abhidevananda (talk) 07:28, 10 March 2016 (UTC)