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 This my waiting,
 Oh I know, Love,
-It cannot prove unavailing.
+It cannot be unavailing.
 The posy had bloomed in form and scent,
-That sweet perfume, beaten it won't be.
+That fragrance, beaten it won't be.
 Floral pollen floats unto azure distant;