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-Please respond, O Lord, in rhythm and song.
+Respond, my Lord, in rhythm and song.
-Please respond, O Lord, in dance and cadence.
+Respond, my Lord, in dance and cadence.
-O my dearest Lord!
+O my dearest and most revered,
-When You Yourself aroused me from slumber,
+When lethargy prevailed, You Yourself shattered it.
 Come dancing in rhythm, come dancing in rhythm.
-I was unconscious in the world of darkness
+Blinded by the world, I was benighted.
-When You came like a blazing sun.
+Like the sun You came into my life anew.
-Flooding my life with Your colourful radiance,
+With Your lustrous beauty, what did You do?
-You intoxicated my mind.
+You painted my life, my mind, with Your color.
-Piercing through the fog of confusion,
+You entranced my mind, entranced my mind.
 Come dancing in rhythm, come dancing in rhythm.
-Come into the core of my heart.
+Piercing all fog, enter the core of my heart.
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