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-O Lord,
+My lonesome mind remains ever alert,
-Awaiting Your arrival,
+Watching the path on which You will come, my Lord,
-My mind remains ever wakeful.
-Come close to me,
+Come closer and closer in song and dance;
-Come close in song and dance.
-Come closer still,
 The door of my heart is never closed.
-Come to me,
+Come, Lord in incense, candlelight, and sweet flower pollen,
-I have prepared fragrance, lights, and flowers
+On gentle dew drenched with my love and devotion.
-With sweet devotion.
+The unflickering flame of my lamp is constantly alight
+For offering ''árati''{{#tag:ref|Ritualistic greeting of a deity involving the waving of a lighted lamp, incense stick, or censer.|group="nb"}} to You, oh Lord of the universe.
-Come to me,
-My pure love is cleansed
-By the gentle dew of my affection.
-O Lord of the universe,
-My unflickering flame of devotion
-Keeps ablaze for You.
 Let raging storms blow,