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-At the end of winter, new leaves appear;
+At winter's end, new leaves appear;
-The old ones get shed.
+Old ones get shed.
 Spring has come to the door
 In the cadence of dance.
 Prancing with plaits aplenty,
-The detached braids drop down.
+Braids detach and drop.
+At winter's end, flowerless trees
+Get loaded with buds.
-At the end of winter, the bare trees burst into bloom.
 "The snow will melt!"
 With this hope, sprouts peep out with a smile.