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 | <poem>
 Painting my eyes with blue eyeliner,
-Today, the rains have come with new finery.
+The rains have arrived with new finery.
 To welcome You they have come now
 With a convergence of cooling clouds.
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 You pervade the atmosphere.
-In salutation to you,
+The bamboos in the palm grove stoop down,
-the bamboos in the bamboo groves
+Bowing in deference to You all around.
-bend down in hundreds of ways.
+The sweetly dancing lotus petals
-Bunches of lotus flowers,
+Speak profusely of a love tryst.
-dance sweetly on waves
+At this grand assembly, You are the king;
-gently expressing their love.
+You enthrall my eyes with Your royal attire.
-You are the king of this grand festival,
-adorned in an enchanting royal dress.
 </poem>
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