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 | <poem>
 The angst of my heart is
-Only due to You; I want You.
+Only due to my wanting You.
 Take away my gloom;
 I beg mercy, I beg mercy.
-I know You are always with me;
+I know You're always with me;
-But I don't see You, cannot hold You.
+But I don't see You, can't embrace You.
-Day and night you are ever present
+Day and night You're ever present
 With a melodious stream of song.
 In each and every cell of my mind,
-Joint and several, my Lover, You reside.
+Joint and several, Lover, You reside.
-In the smile of the moon,
+In bright moonbeams at evening's dusk,
-In the early dawn,
+In mild sunrays at break of dawn,
-In the haze of dusk,
+In the flash of lightning bolts,
-In the lightning's flash,
+In deepest dark and truest light,
-In radiant sun,
+Outside and in, You envelop me;
-In cimmerian dark,
+So due to You, I'm without sleep.
-You surround me
-Inside and out;
-With my being
-You are inextricably entwined.
-I am ever awake,
-Awaiting your advent.
 </poem>
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