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-Besides You, who else can show clemency?
+Besides You, who else can show clemency;
-Throughout the world, whom else to revere?
+Who else is universally revered?
 Everyone longs for Your tenderness;
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 The foolish and illiterate You never disdain.
 You are everyone's life, everyone's aspiration;
-And so around You the delight of all rotates.
+And so, around You the felicity of all rotates.
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