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 To parts unknown a breeze floats off.
 It pierces minds with that sweet scent
-To pass on the news to hearts that are lost.
+To pass the news on to hearts that are lost.
 A fairy goes flying and circles around,
-Dallying from desire to abduct the lotus.
+Dallying from a desire to abduct the lotus.
-A prince had seated himself on a winged horse
+A prince was seated on a winged horse
 When the fairy came flying to take the flower.
 The fairy flies away, and the prince follows;
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 Replied the prince with stern resolution.
-"Theft is not condoned for worship of a deity;
+"Theft won't be condoned for worship of a deity;
-Walk the path of righteousness with noble deeds."
+Move on the path of righteousness with noble deeds."
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