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 I decorate the plants with flowers.
-To arid bosoms I bring a stream of life;
+To arid bosoms I bring the stream of life;
-The march toward infinity, that I inspire.
+Marching toward infinity is what I inspire.
-Stealthily, in every corner of the heart,
+Stealthily, in heart's every alcove,
 With song and dance, I infuse love.
-I uplift the dejected,
+I provide inspiration to the desperate;
-and honour the defeated.
+All regret I induce them to forget.
-I steal their sorrows and pains.
+With everyone I constantly remain;
-I exist in the minds of all.
+Through all my actions this fact I proclaim.
-Let people know the supreme truth
-through all my actions.
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