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-You are the soul of everybody,
+You are the self of everybody,
 And so I've loved You only.
 I've found You in lieu of everything,
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 Their exuberant hearts are effusive.
 All my hope and all my love,
-Cupped palms full, I've brought.
+With cupped palms full, I've brought.
-In rainbow radiance
+In a rainbow-colored far-away sky,
-from distant skies
+Lord, I've become friends with You.
-my mind embraces you.
+By that splendrous hue my mind is dyed;
+And my life spews into the Formless.
-My life
+Today, my soul is a fount of ambrosia,
-cascades
+With its voice, I've become eloquent.
-towards you
-Formless one
-and like a nectarial flow
-I become
-eloquent with the voice
-of my inner heart.
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