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-Who are you standing alone at the wayside,
+Who are you all alone, by the wayside standing,
-Eyes full of tears, eyes full of tears?
+Your eyes full of tears, eyes full of tears?
-Who are you, gazing alone at the blue yonder,
+Who are you all alone, gazing toward the heavens,
-Arms lifted upward, arms lifted upward?
+Your arms lifted upward, arms lifted upward?
-What you wanted, you did not get.
+What you've wanted, you don't get;
-What you got, you did not want.
+What you've gotten, you don't want.
-The longings of your mind are not satiated.
+Your fervent, belly-yearnings are unsatisfied;
-The love filling your heart has evaporated.
+The love that filled your heart, it has gone dry.
-Those you looked at, you loved.
+To everyone you have viewed, you have given love;
-From them in return, you received hate.
+From their side, you have received scorn.
-You have lost everything, and what have you gained?
+You have lost everything, and what have you accomplished?
-Your only acquisition is the song filling your throat.
+Your store is but a song, the song with which your throat is filled.
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