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-Who are You Who came today?
+Who came, Who came today?
-You came and rocked the cradle of the universe.
+Rocking the world's cradle, You came.
-You were in the realm of thought, but You came down
+From the realm of thought, down You came;
-And mingled, accepting earth's embrace.
+You mingled, bearing Earth's embrace.
-The distant star has come near;
+You came most near, a star from faraway;
-A faraway melody has enthralled my mind.
+The mind You thrilled, music from a distant place.
-You are the lost notes that came floating into my ears;
+The lost tune floating into ears, You came;
-You are the lost rhythm that made me dance.
+The lost beat that makes us dance You gave.
-Wiping away the tears that filled my eyes,
+The tears that were filling eyes You wiped away;
-You are the jewel of the sea that soothes my spirit.
+Oh, Jewel of the Sea, our hearts You assuaged.
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