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-In a dream He came;
+In a dream He had appeared;
-In that same dream He left.
+He went away in that same dream.
-Without even speaking, He left;
+Unspeaking, He departed;
-Without even being invited, He came.
+He had come uninvited.
-In the private corner of my heart,
+Inside my heart, in a private niche,
-He silently took His seat.
+Silently He took His seat.
-With His own hand He strummed
+His own hand a-strumming,
-A tune on my lyre.
+He'd played a tune on my lute-strings.
-Raising His eyes toward my face,
+Lifting His eyes toward my face,
-He wanted to say something.
+What is it He had wished to say?
-I don't know why He felt hurt—
+I know not due to what offense,
-Without even giving notice, He left.
+Without informing me He left.
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