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-Come, come, Lord
+Come, Lord, please do come
-Into my heart...
+Into my heart-core...
-With Your rosy feet and charming face,
+Rosy feet and charming visage,
-With Your sweet, sweet smile.
+With a laugh, honey-pleasant.
-Your name thrills my heart.
+On Your name, in life a thrill awakes;
-I am imbued with Your color.
+I get dyed by just Your paint.
-In Your song, in Your dance,
+On Your song, in Your dance, goes
-My everything dissolves.
+All that's mine, faded away.
-In this very life, in my deepest meditation,
+Life after life, in every meditation,
-Whatever I am, it vanishes.
+Who I am, I get lost.
-Come, come, Lord
+Come, Lord, please do come
-Into my heart...
+Into my heart-core...
-Come You, please come.
+Come, You, please do come.
 </poem>
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