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 Járá esechilo tárá cale geche
 Táder carań cihna rayeche
-Dhúlir pare ár man májhe
+Dhúlira pare ár mana májhe
 Kichui vyartha nay ei dharańiir
-Mukher hási ár vyathár ánkhiniir
+Mukher hási ár vyathár áṋkhiniir
 Duye niye dhárá bay jiivana nadir
 Kabhu maru májhe kabhu rúperi sáje
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 Járá cale geche áche tomára práńe
 Tomáre ghire náce mukta mane
-Tumi lokáshray bhávátiita vismay{{#tag:ref|Both the Second Bengali Edition and the audio rendition give this word as ''cinmay'', although the Sargam is consistent as ''vismay''. As there seems no clear reason for the change, the original lyrics are retained.|group="nb"}}
+Tumi lokáshray bhávátiita vismay
-Sabár marme tava mádhuri báje{{#tag:ref|Though both the audio rendition and the Sargam give this word as ''báje'', the Second Bengali Edition replaces it with ''ráje''. Again, there seems no clear reason for the change, and so the original lyrics are retained.|group="nb"}}
+Sabár marme tava mádhuri báje
 </poem>
 | <poem>
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 কিছুই ব্যর্থ নয় এই ধরণীর
 মুখের হাসি আর ব্যথার আঁখিনীর
-দু'য়ে মিলে ধারা বয় জীবন নদীর
+দু'য়ে নিয়ে মিলে? ধারা বয় জীবন নদীর
 কভু মরুমাঝে কভু রূপেরই সাজে
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 == Recordings ==
-Currently, only the following audio rendition is available; however, there is at least one significant discrepancy with the originally published version.
+Currently, only the following audio rendition is available; however, there are several discrepancies with the originally published version (the Sargam). It should be noted that there are also several discrepancies between the originally published version (Bengali) and the later published versions (both Bengali and Roman script); however, there is no clear necessity for any alteration of the original version or any evidence that these changes were mandated by the composer.
 * {{PSmp3alt|https://sarkarverse.org/PS/2000-2999-f/2651%20CALAMA%27N%20EI%20DHARITRIITE.mp3|singer=Acarya Cetanananda Avadhuta|weblink=[[Sarkarverse]]}}
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 [[Category:Songs of Prabhat Samgiita]]
 [[Category:Songs given in 1985]]
+[[Category:Songs with no good audio file]]