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 Lord, holding to the path had they moved,
 All the ascetics; You now goad me on that way.
-With rays of light illuminating truth unveiled,
+With rays of light illuminating, with truth unveiled,
-Clinging to that path I will go, renouncing shame.
+Clinging to that path I'll go, renouncing shame.
 Let there be a hundred pebbles, let all thorns remain;
-I will carry on upon high-tide, I'll not credit wane.
+Upon high-tide I will carry on, I'll not credit wane.
 With only Your stream of thought, shedding just Your rays,
-I will float on, dressed however You will array.
+I will go on sailing, dressed however You'll array.
 On Your path, Lord, there is not a trace of fear;
 This be my only prayer: kindly grant a jot of mercy.
 It will hew all deep attachment, doubt it will cleave;
-With feet unwavering, doing Your deeds will I stay.
+With feet unwavering, doing Your deeds I'll remain.
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