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 Dúr niilimár sheś diganta
 Khuṋje pái náko tava siimánta
-Bhavábháve tumi ucchala
+Bhavabháre tumi ucchala
 Tava krpá cháŕá kona gati nái
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 দূর নীলিমার শেষ দিগন্ত
 খুঁজে’ পাই নাকো তব সীমান্ত
-ভবাভাবে তুমি উচ্ছল
+ভবভারে তুমি উচ্ছল
 তব কৃপা ছাড়া কোন গতি নাই
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 Yon azure's final horizon.
 Having searched, I don't find Your terminus;
-Unrestricted, You are all-pervasive.
+Amid earthly sorrows, You are all-pervasive.
-Except for Your grace, there is no velocity;
+There is no refuge except Your mercy;
-And so that kindness all of us beseech.
+So that kindness all of us beseech.
-Absent You, Lord, no one else is there
+Absent You, Lord, none other is there
 With the flame of love resplendent.
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