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 Dúr niilimár sheś diganta
 Khuṋje pái náko tava siimánta
-Bhavabháre{{#tag:ref|In all of the Bengali source, this word is given as ''Bhávábháve''. While that could be a highly unusual conjunct word, it would make little sense in context. Hence, it is likely that a typo got mistakenly propagated. The most probable alternative seems to be ''Bhavabháre''.|group="nb"}} tumi ucchala
+Bhavabháve{{#tag:ref|In all of the Bengali source, this word is given as ''Bhávábháve''. While that could be a highly unusual conjunct word, it would make little sense in context. Hence, it is likely that a typo got mistakenly propagated. The most probable alternative seems to be ''Bhavabháve'', although ''Bhavabháre'' (in earthly sorrow) might also be possible.|group="nb"}} tumi ucchala
 Tava krpá cháŕá kona gati nái
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 Yon azure's final horizon.
 Having searched, I don't find Your terminus;
-Amid earthly sorrows, You are pervasive.
+In all extant or nonextant, You are pervasive.
 There is no refuge except Your mercy;