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 | <poem>
 In a lovely dream, with footsteps mild,
-You have come into my mind.
+You had come into my mind.
 Filling my eyes with fresh floral design,
-You have come into my mind.
+You had come into my mind.
 Then, flowers were dispensing pollen's honey;
 And birds were singing rehearsed melodies.
 The love-sick, spurning all ties worldly,
-Rushed forth dancing on way to Thee.
+Have raced forth dancing on the way to Thee.
-In a gentle breeze, with potent memories,
+By a gentle breeze with potent memories,
-Love overflowing, tenderly pleasing,
+Love overflowing and tenderly pleasing,
-I cast off drowsiness energetically;
+Discarding drowsiness energetically,
 Your anklets were rhythmically jingling.
 With [[:wikipedia:Cuckoo|cuckoo's]] dulcet notes in garden mine,
-You have come into my mind.
+You had come into my mind.
 </poem>
 |}