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-He has come murmuring in my heart,
+He has come, and there is a humming in my heart.
-Overflowing with sweet nectar.
+Nectar is overflowing, honey is dropping.
-The invisible Lord has appeared in my mind,
+The unseen God has appeared in my mind,
-Flooding my whole being with effulgence.
+And everything is glowing.
+Honey percolates.
-With what an enchanting appearance He has come!
+In such fascinating raiment He has come.
-With what an exhilarating smile He is laughing!
+With such heart-melting smiles He laughs.
-His effulgence has painted rainbow colours
+His light touches the clouds of my afflictions,
-On the clouds of my pain.
+And rainbow colors fill the mind.
-All the songs, all the rhythms,
+In this universe, all songs, rhythms, and melodies
-All the melodies of the universe
+Are to receive Him in mind and heart, bestowing blessings.
-Are simply to welcome Him.
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