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-The divine effulgence is suffusing down from above,
+Light descends, streaming, streaming;
-For today the Lord of light has come.
+For the Lord of light has come.
-The Lord of Light has come today.
+The Lord of Light has come today;
 The Lord of light has come.
-Trembling in fear,
-The forces of darkness are fast disappearing.
+All dark shadows are receding;
-With a roaring thunder, the storm is raging.
+They tremble in trepidation.
-The awesome Lord proclaims,
-"Do not be afraid, O do not be afraid.
+With thunder, the storm is raging
-All the fog is fading away."
+As the Supreme Destroyer proclaims:
-The thunderclouds,
+"Have no fear, no fear—
-The stars and the moon,
+All fogs are lifting."
-The boundless universe
-Have all awakened today,
+The thunderclouds, the stars, the moon,
-For, the Lord of light has come.
+The boundless universe have all awakened today,
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