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 Saying He would come, He left;
 Still that Friend has not returned.
-With harp's flourish, He told...
+With harp's flourish, He told:
 See simplicity, set aside deceit.
-Neglecting the goal, I moved on many paths;
+Forgetting the goal, I walked down many roads;
-I did not follow the bright surface of righteousness.
+The bright path of righteousness I did not follow.
 With bewitching beckonings was I enticed,
-Forgetting Your chief behest, seek the truth.
+Neglecting Your crucial behest, seek the truth.
-Today light shines forth from all sides
+Today, in every direction sparkles the light.
-telling me to closely remain on the right path.
+It proclaims that graciously You are just nearby.
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