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-Say something; let me hear something.
+Say something, tell me something;
-Please don't go so soon,
+Please don't go so soon.
 To the great blue void of Your cosmos,
-Do not cast me aside.
+Don't cast me aside.
-Make me one with you!
+Let me be intimate with Thee,
-Through myriad path, myriad streams,
+In many ways, in many streams.
-my budding mind went; its sweetness—
+The nectar of my budding mind,
-Don't let it wither.
+Don't let it dry up.
-Only You I have loved,
+Only You have I loved,
-Through sorrow and happiness, day and night.
+With grief and joy, night and day.
-In mud, the lotus (of my heart) has blossomed—
+In mud, I've kept my lotus abloom;
-Do not strip its petals.</poem>
+Please don't strip its petals.
+</poem>
 |}