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 Kusum paráge alake alake
 Dyulok duliche áloke áloke
-Tridash nemeche{{#tag:ref|The Bangla source is divided as to whether this word should be ''nemeche'' or ''neveche''. The meaning is the same. Hence, the originally published ''nemeche'' is retained.|group="nb"}} e martyaloke
+Tridash neveche{{#tag:ref|The Bangla source is divided as to whether this word should be ''nemeche'' or ''neveche''. The meaning is almost identical. Here, the latest published version is retained.|group="nb"}} e martyaloke
 Ár kena káṋdá bháuṋá mane
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 কুসুম পরাগে অলকে অলকে
 দ্যুলোক দুলিছে আলোকে আলোকে
-ত্রিদশ নেমেছে এ মর্ত্যলোকে
+ত্রিদশ নেবেছে এ মর্ত্যলোকে
 আর কেন কাঁদা ভাঙা-মনে
 </poem>