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 To not see it again is the rule.
-Words already spoken, pains already endured,
+Words once spoken, pains once suffered,
 Are lost in the infinite.
 Day after day passes.
-Whatever began in the distant past,
+Those whose birth was long ago,
-There is something more ancient still,
+Their history is yet more ancient.
-Woven in the melodies of the strings of dream,
+On the surreal strings of heart's lyre,
-On the lyre of the inner heart.
+They remain twined in melody.
-Those who are lost from us
+Those who are lost to us
-Are merged in Your endless vibration.
+Live on in Your imagination.
-And thus the days pass by.
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