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 Come into my life, rousing new consciousness.
-Come with the dance and rhythm that intoxicates the earth;
+Come stepping rhythmically in the dance that enchants the world
-Pour nectar into my mind in ever-new colors and hues.
+Flood my mind with the nectar of new songs having new notes.
 Come with a new adoration onto this dusty earth;