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 You perfumed the way, Thou without peer.
-By your touch,
+By Your touch, buds bloom in myriad fashions;
-buds bloom in hundreds of styles.
+At Your delight, the garden madly dances.
-By your joy,
-my garden dances in frenzy.
+On a rain-drenched night,
-O most memorable one,
+You went away, Thou unforgettable.
-You went away on a raindrenched night.
 With Your warm and tender eyes,
-You crushed my heart, Thou most beloved
+You crushed my heart, Thou most beloved.
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