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 A new vibration in the world.
-Deep-rooted is the stir that You have given;
+Deep-rooted is the stir that You have given—
-It's in fragrant flowers, both without and within.
+It's in fragrant flowers, without and within;
-It's in perfumed incense and the honeybees of mind,
+It's in perfumed incense and honeybees of mind;
-And it's in the cosmetic balm applied on my eyes.
+And it's in cosmetic balm applied to my eyes.
-and have brought radiance
+With [[:wikipedia:Mango|mango]], [[:wikipedia:Mimusops elengi|bakul]], and [[:wikipedia:Bombax|shimul]] blossoms,
-to the mango, bokul, shimul and other blossoms
+You've colored my heart's silken cloth,
-lining both banks of my heart.
+On this mental spring, in hushed secrecy,
+Bashfully at Your lotus feet.
-You have coloured mind's black bee
-which hums secretly
-and moves silently in gentle trepidation.
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