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 With that surging stream of effulgence,
 Come, Lord, into my mind; please come.
-With that golden downpour of song,
+By that golden downpour of song,
-Please be seated, Lord, in my inner self.
+Lord, please be seated in my inner self.
-In a vast ocean of only darkness—
+In an ocean of utter darkness—
 Clasping my hand, oh, take me beyond.
 Let my tears of nothing but sorrow
 Be infused with profound love.
 With a compassionate flood of pearls,
-Smile, Lord, please smile inside my heart.
+Smile, Lord, smile inside my heart.
-Keep me very close to you.
+Hold me close and still closer;
-Don't forget me even for a single moment.
+Even by mistake, never let me forget.
-Don't allow delusion to overtake me.
+With Your astounding flow of colors,
+Give me no scope for delusion.
-Keep me always
-in the flow of colourful invigorating omniscience.
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