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 It proceeds, it proceeds.
 Having passed by groves of [[:wikipedia:Saccharum spontaneum|Kans grass]],
-Traversing jasmine-littered paths
+Traversed jasmine-littered paths,
-And cutting cross the dew-soaked tracts,
+And cut across the dew-soaked tracts,
 Toward the sky it does spy, spy, spy.
-Having consorted with life's pollen,
+Having fraternized with life's pollen,
-Flashing in a mental niche
+Glittered in a psychic niche,
-And crushing walls of obstruction,
+And pulverized walls of obstruction,
 To an unknown place it does race, race, race.
 Having cleared aside amassed clouds,
-Thereby the colored heavens roused
+The colorful heavens roused,
 And a sweet touch brought about,
 The hymn of remote country it does sing, sing, sing.