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-The seat is now ready
+Ready now is the seat,
-For You.
+For Your sake.
-My garland is now threaded,
+Strung is a wreath,
-And I remain alert.
+And I am awake.
-Enter slow and stately
+Please come slow and stately
-The temple of my mind.
+Into shrine of psyche.
-The lamp is lit now
+The lamp, now it's lit
-To reverently greet You.
+For a welcome reverent.
-Oh come, please come;
+Oh come, please appear;
-Come now smilingly—
+Arrive smilingly—
-I beseech Your grace.
+Mercy I beseech.
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