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-Hope upon hope accumulates
+My expectations accumulate
 Over so many lives passed.
-Still, of those hopes,
+Yet, of those expectations,
 None are fulfilled.
-None have come whom i longed for.
+They did not happen—
-They have thronged in my mind
+Those that were in my mind.
-whom i never called.
+Those that I never wanted;
+They came in abundance.
-All love, appearances and passings have drifted
+Whenever love occurred
-on causing a rift between the present and the past.
+It was honey-coated comings and goings.
+It always went away,
+Satisfying for only a span of time.
 While walking in the flower garden,
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 In the whirl wind,
 I savoured/sensed a sweet southern breeze.
 My hopes are illusive mirages.
 Only your two rosy feet remain