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 None are fulfilled.
-They did not happen—
+They did not happen–
 Those that were in my mind.
-Those that I never wanted;
+Those that I never wanted–
 They came in abundance.
 Whenever love occurred,
 It was honey-coated comings and goings,
-Always leaving,
+Always departing,
-Satisfying for only a span of time.
+Gratifying only for a span of time.
-While walking in the flower garden,
+Touring the flower garden,
-thorns pricked my feet.
+Thorns arose at each step.
-In the whirl wind,
+In the gentle southern breeze,
-I savoured/sensed a sweet southern breeze.
+I met with a cyclone.
-My hopes are illusive mirages.
+I've now realized that my expectations
-Only your two rosy feet remain
+Are but a mirage;
-as the last refuge
+The disappointments at the end of hope
-of my despondent heart.
+Are Your two rosy feet.
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