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-The sound of your flute has made me restless.
+O Lord, Your flute sound makes me restless
-My mind cannot tell the difference between time and nontime.
+day in and day out, heedless of time.
-The flute plays to the panchama melody, calling my name.
+The flute sounds in high pitch, calling me by name
-Without hesitating, i rush towards it.
+and I rush alone forgetting all shyness.
+My mind gets detached from job,
-My mind cannot concentrate on work,
+always listening to the melody of flute,
-I constantly hear the flute sing its dangerous melodies.
+which creates utter ruin.
-I am determined not to listen to it anymore.
+I plan that I would not pay attention
-No matter how much it calls, i will turn away.
+and respond to that any more.
+No matter how ardent be the call,
-But alas, i cannot help but to hear it.
+I would feign deafness.
-And when i do, i become filled with remorse.
+But I cannot help hearing
-How shall i get rid of this bothersome sound?
+and thinking of that I die with shyness.
+You tell what an agony is this.
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