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-In the magnolia garden,
+In the magnolia grove, on a southern breeze,
-With the southern breeze,
+You came today with the resonance of music.
-You came today
+With the resonance of music You Yourself came.
-With Your rhythmic songs.
-All pangs of loss,
+The unspeakable pangs of loss—
-All disappointments,
+You have made us forget all deprivation.
-All weaknesses
-Have been forgotten.
-On the path of movement,
+On the path of movement entwined with memories
-Filled with memories,
+Oscillating between hope and despair—
-In the moving swing
+You played the flute of love
-Of hopes and disappointments,
+And everything was filled with sweetness.
-You played Your flute of love
-And filled everything with Your sweetness.
-In the flowing stream of divine light
+In the flowing stream of effulgence,
-You have manifested Yourself in endless ways.
+In endless ways, You graciously reveal Yourself.
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