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-In the magnolia grove, on a southern breeze,
+In the magnolia grove, on southern breeze,
-You came today with the resonance of music.
+With burst of song, today You appeared;
-With the resonance of music You Yourself came.
+With burst of song, in person You appeared.
-The unspeakable pangs of loss—
+Vanquished are distress and disappointment;
-You have made us forget all deprivation.
+You made me forget all deprivation.
-On the path of movement entwined with memories
+On my journey intertwined with memories,
-Oscillating between hope and despair,
+Twixt hope and despair I'd been wavering.
-The flute of love constantly sounded—
+Playing the flute of love constantly,
-Everything was filled with the sweetness of You.
+With all sweetness You've been filling me.
-In the flowing stream of effulgence,
+With that brilliant light's streaming cascade,
-In endless ways, You graciously revealed Yourself.
+You granted Your embrace in a hundred ways.
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