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Mislaid in the magnolia grove was
Mislaid in the magnolia grove is
My incomplete poem.
My incomplete poem.
In that sweet fragrance, I confess defeat.
In that sweet aroma, I concede defeat.
Seeking not within, I went about without—
Seeking not within, I move about without—
I did not heed Your message.
I do not heed Your message.


All pains embedded in the cave of my heart,
All pains embedded in the core of my heart,
All unspoken words, have vanished.
All secrets— they've now vanished.
Whose fragrance brought about this transformation.
Whose fragrance wrought this transformation.
I cannot understand
I cannot fathom.


My verse, my song—
My verse, my song—