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 In a redolent, efflorescent garden.
 Secretly, in a corner of the mind,
-You reside, thrilling with delight–
+You reside, filled with delight–
-Thrilling with delight, thrilling with delight.
+Delightful, filled with delight.
-From You there's nobody who is far;
+From You there is no one who is far;
 With You all do speak their inmost heart.
-In background music for each one's mental state,
+As background music for every mental state,
 Your delicious sweetness, it pervades–
 It pervades, it pervades.