Dala ujar kare phelo phelo: Difference between revisions

Dala ujar kare phelo phelo (view source)

Revision as of 06:17, 16 October 2015

213 bytes added , 16 October 2015

m

Verse 3 and some refinements - translation complete

Abhidevananda

Bureaucrats, Interface administrators, oversight, Administrators

85,275

edits

@@ Line 63: / Line 63: @@
 Dispense all in your wicker basket{{#tag:ref|According to the [http://dsalsrv02.uchicago.edu/cgi-bin/romadict.pl?query=%E0%A6%A1%E0%A6%BE%E0%A6%B2%E0%A6%BE&searchhws=yes&table=biswas-bengali Samsad Bengali-English Dictionary] ''d́álá'' (ডালা) is a tray-shaped basket that typically is used for holding offerings to a deity.|group="nb"}}
 On this sweet, auspicious day.
-Pour out all in your tray
+Clear out everything in your tray
-Before everyone's joint prospect.
+For everyone's collective prospect.
 Songs of weeping sing no more;
 Set aside all your heavy trials.
 A doe is startled by what she sees,
-But you will no longer be alarmed.
+But no longer will you be alarmed.
 Replace all that's in your heart
-With thrilling thought of Mohan.{{#tag:ref|Here, Mohan (মোহন) literally means "the one who is charming or captivating". This is a common name for [[Krsna|Krśńa]] and a general appellation for the Supreme.|group="nb"}}
+With the thrilling thought of Mohan.{{#tag:ref|Here, Mohan (মোহন) literally means "the one who is charming or captivating". This is a common name for [[Krsna|Krśńa]] and a general appellation for the Supreme.|group="nb"}}
-Sing songs of melodies ever new
+Go on singing a new, new melody;
-and fill your life with love.
+With a new tune, uplift your whole life.
-The thief divine steals the nectar of mind
+All of the ambrosia brought He,
-in the silent stillness of night.
+The stealer of mind,{{#tag:ref|Manacor (মনচোর) literally means "the stealer of mind" or "heart thief". This is a common name for [[Krsna|Krśńa]] and a general appellation for the Supreme.|group="nb"}} this silent night.
 </poem>
 |}