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 Why does it traverse a lonesome orbit?
 Constellations, blazing starlights—
-Why do they shine only on new moon nights?
+Why only project on new moon nights?
-Why children, fresh as floral blooms,
+Like flower buds are infants– why then
-Must cry so loud and long?
+Do they weep so long and so often?
+The light of moon– why does it shine
-Why moonbeams peep
+Only in gaps when dark clouds hide?
-Like frightened (captive) sheep
+The pleasant and gentle wind
-Through slits in ominous clouds?
+Rains down hail with a raucous laugh.
-Why the peaceful sky with its gentle breeze
-Can suddenly transform,
-Spitting streams of hard and painful hail
-With the raucous laughter of a storm?
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