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 | <poem>
 After day comes the night,
-Just as woe accompanies delight.
+Just as woe attends delight.
 Union entails separation
 Insofar as Your liila.
-I proceed dancing to Your song,
+I proceed in dance to Your song,
 Keeping time with Your rhythm.
-Suddenly, a beat gets missed;
+Suddenly, I miss a beat
-I fall behind, oh Rapid One.
+And lag behind, oh Speedy One.
 Having regained inspiration,
 Moved again, I am addicted.
-I pass my days of mirth
+Tinged with merry laughter,
-in the midst of radiant joy
+Days pass by, illuminated.
-then, suddenly, darkness descends;
+Suddenly, darkness descends;
-I am overwhelmed
+And, wailing, I am ruined.
-and cry in pain.
+Tenderly, You wipe my eyes;
-O lord, you come
+You make my life bright.
-to wipe away my tears with love
-and make my life effulgent.
 </poem>
 |}