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 You've appeared, You've appeared.
-In the blue yonder, like a peacock,
+On blue yonder, like a peacock,
 Yourself You have spread.
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 Has gained new light.
 With the jingling of Your ankle bells,
-The three worlds{{#tag:ref|Earth, heaven, and hell.|group="nb"}} are aroused.
+The three worlds{{#tag:ref|Earth, heaven, and hell.|group="nb"}} are roused.
 Come closer, stay closer,
-Now that You've let Yourself be found.
+When You've let Yourself be found.
 In me is no devotion, nor any ability;