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 Filling my mind with sweet fragrance.
-Who else is mine except You?
+Who else but You is there
-Who else listens to me?
+To hear my heart's tales?
-There is no other to whom,
+To none else would I confide
-in solitude, I can covey my secrecy.
+My private secrets
-O Brother, continue singing,
+Sing, sing, abiding Friend, sing
-and fill the air with fragrance.
+To charge the air with hope.
 Please take, take willingly
-And with a smile, everything of mine
+And with a smile, my everything.
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