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-O my Eternal Companion, hoping to attain You,
+O my companion, in hope of You,
-My eyes are devoid of sleep.
+On my eyelids is no sleep.
-Keeping pace with Your rhythm,
+To match my cadence with Your beat,
-Every moment just fades away.
+Mine gets canceled at every wink.
 My mind gets pulled towards mean thoughts,