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-Come, please come, please come close;
+Come close, please come close;
 My distant Friend, come close.
-For You alone, my mental lotus,
+For You alone, my mental lotus
-It is full of pollen.
+Remains full of pollen.
-I have kept my stainless lotus in turbid streams.
+In a muddy pond,
-It is waiting for your rosy feet.
+I've kept abloom a pristine lily,
+On which Your rosy feet will cross.
-My lotus, full of fragrance, is meant for You alone.
+Come close, please come close;
-Come, o friend of the distance, come closer to me.
+For You alone my mental lotus
+Remains full of fragrance.
 I have kept my white sparkling lotus amidst chilly winds,