Eso tumi ruper chatay: Difference between revisions

Eso tumi ruper chatay (view source)

23 bytes added , 9 May 2015

m

Verse 3 - translation complete

85,175

edits

@@ Line 67: / Line 67: @@
 An ever new humanity.
-Don't keep me away.
+Never keep me at a distance;
-Raise my consciousness with your rhythmic tune.
+Make me mindful of Your rhythmic melody.
-So that i may never feel,
+Thus, getting lost and knowing sorrow,
-the pain of loss.
+I won't tremble in grief.
 </poem>
 |}