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-Today at dawn, autumn has come.
+Today, at morn, autumn has come.
-Bathed in dewdrops, it has come.
+Bathed in dew/frost, it has come.
-Why did it come, oh why did it come?
+Why did it come, why did it come?
-To adorn You, autumn has come.
+To adorn You with power it has come.
 Bringing dahlias and chrysanthemums,
 Smiling in sheaves of golden paddy,
-To adorn You, autumn has come.
 Bringing sweet pomelos,
-Smiling and giving a touch of orange colour,
+Smiling and giving a touch of orange color,
-To adorn You, autumn has come.
 Bringing the perfume of plum flowers,
-Smiling in the juicy dates, it has come,
+Smiling in the juicy dates, it has come.
-To adorn You, autumn has come.
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